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Preparations Planned While Peaked (AO3 Link)

This title is my least favorite, but it serves its purpose. Also its an alliteration!

Care Package
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Flu
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Home Remedy
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Excessive use of tissues/"Blow Your Nose" + Seasonal Allergies
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"Does this look infected to you?"
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Frostbite
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Heartburn
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I like writing this little family a lot. They don’t always express it explicitly, but they really do care for each other.

Current Location: Home
Listening to: Rising Kingdom

Passing the Torch - An Interlude (AO3 Link)

The title for this was the first I came up with of the four, because we're quite literally passing the sickfic disease from one location to another.

“Do you know how to take care of a sick person?”
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“Great. Now I have your germs all over me.”
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Current Mood: calm
Current Location: Home
Listening to: Rising Kingdom

Of Event Planning and Sick Younger Brothers (AO3 link)

This title is quite literal, but it works! I was trying really hard to de-emphasize the 'event planning' aspect, because its only one fill of five.

Psychogenic Fever/Stress Induced Illness + ‘I Might Be A Teeny Tiny Bit Sick, But It’s Fine.’
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Nausea/Upset Stomach + ‘I Need You To Pull Over!’
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(Intense) Coddling
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A Cry for Attention
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Whining/Crying + ‘Can You Be Brave For Me?’
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Current Mood: cheerful
Current Location: Home
Listening to: Rising Kingdom

A Jade-Shaded Vacation
Fandom: Super Mario & Related Fandoms
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Mario & Luigi & Peach
Characters: Mario, Luigi, Peach, Original Female Character
Additional Tags: Aromantic, Aromantic Mario, arophobia, Friendship, Adventure, Humor
Chapters: 1/1
Words: 3,334
Summary: Meanwhile, Luigi was gingerly getting to his feet. “Are all your vacations like this?!” he asked, incredulous.
“Unfortunately,” Mario and Peach responded in tandem. “I need to overhaul the tourism board,” Peach sighed as the boys helped her to her feet. “They can't keep recommending me places with power-crazed magic users.”
// Or: Mario, Luigi, and Peach were getting ready to enjoy their vacation when it was suddenly interrupted by the town terror. They decide to help stop her, but according to the townsfolk, they’ll have to make a terrible sacrifice....

( Writer's thoughts )

Next up! Sicktember prompt fills and the Blizzard sickfic! (Lots of sickfics for the next few months, lol)

Current Mood: content
Current Location: Home
Listening to: Tap Troupe - Rhythm Heaven Fever

Interrupted Expectations
Fandom: Super Mario
Rating: G
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationship(s): Mario & Luigi, Mario & Peach, Mario & Bowser
Character(s): Mario, Luigi, Peach, Bowser
Additional Tags: Aromantic, Aromantic Mario, Multiple Endings
Chapters: 4
Words: 1,815 (Complete)
Summary: A little girl has a question for Mario. Will he be forced to answer it?

( Some thoughts: )

So now I'm gonna go back to writing the Blizzard fic! ^_^
And I'm gonna try and collect more Aromantic prompts to use with Mario, and maybe fill the Aro!Mario tag all by myself!

Current Location: Home Home
Listening to: Line Without a Hook - Ricky Montgomery

See You Later, Professor Toad!

Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Mario, Olivia, Professor Toad
Additional Tags: Mild spoilers
Length: 2 chapters | 812 words | Complete
Summary: “So Professor, what are you going to do now that the sun is back?”

[Hi this is future me who forgot to make a post for this fic lmaooo. This fic is cute as hell, though.]

( Very Brief Notes )

Current Mood: blah

Cinderello: A SonAmy Story
For years, Sonic has been the slave of his stepfather, Dr. Robotnik, who has Sonic’s stepbrothers on his side. Everything changes when the household gets a letter…
Rating: G
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationship(s): Sonic/Amy, Sonic & Tails
Character(s): Sonic, Amy, Tails, Dr. Eggman, Shadow, Silver
Additional Tags: Male Cinderella, Cinderella Elements, Parody
Chapters: 5
Words: 8,980 (Complete)

So Microsoft OneNote tells me that I started outlining this fic on December 17, 2011. I was in 8th grade. This was my first fanfic ever.

And now it's complete!!!

( I had a lot to say, oops )

Finally, did you know that I had planned a sequel? That's right! I had the bare-bones outline of a sequel to this story! It was less fairytale, more original plot, and I won't ever write it for two reasons:

1) It will require me to write a bunch of action scenes, and I don’t know how to do those, and
2) It is shippy as all hell, and I'm Very Aromantic. So. Absolutely not. This fic's existing romantic hintings are enough for me, lol

May that outline rest on Microsoft OneNote for the rest of eternity~ o7

Current Location: Home

Red-Green Colorblind
Oh, Luigi’s seen this flag before!

Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationship(s): Mario & Luigi
Character(s): Mario, Luigi
Additional Tags: Aromantic, Aromantic Mario, Aromantic Awareness Week 2022
Words: 239 (Complete)

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( Here's the fic! )

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( Here's some ramblings! )

Current Mood: accomplished
Current Location: Home
Listening to: Buoyant Boogie

Folding Creases
"Her folds are starting to disappear! She’ll be regular paper in no time if we fail to take action!"

Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Character(s): Mario, Kamek, Olivia, Bowser Jr.
Additional Tags: Slight Green Streamer Spoilers
Words: 671 (Complete)

( Ramblings about the fic )

Current Mood: blah
Current Location: Home
Listening to: Speak with Your Heart (Live)

A Quiet Lull in Snif City
“It’s a shame that there’s no moon to join that lovely reflection,” Professor Toad softly said.

Rating: General Audiences

Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply

Relationship: Mario & Professor Toad

Characters: Mario, Professor Toad

Additional Tags: Yellow Streamer Spoilers, Implied/Referenced Character Death

Words: 732 (Complete)

( Random Ramblings about the fic )

Current Mood: happy
Current Location: Home

A Short Rest in Shangri-Spa
Kamek was sitting on a bench.

Rating: General Audiences

Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply

Relationship: Mario & Kamek

Characters: Mario, Kamek, Olivia

Additional Tags: Slight Green Streamer Spoilers

Words: 1,497 (Complete)

So I got really attached to Kamek somehow, so I had to write a fic with him. I don't know what this game did to make me love this dude so much; it's a little bit scary, tbh. Oh well. I'd still die for him.

( Notes )

Current Mood: pleased
Current Location: Home

Faceless

What's it like having your face removed, Mario? (Spoilers for Chapter 3/Yellow streamer)

Rating: T
Chapters: 3; Words: 430 => Complete

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( Here's the fic! )

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I’ve never written in this style before, so this was a fun little experiment! I love the paper-themed body horror in Origami King, and the question about what having a face punched out felt like recently began haunting me, so here we are~! I wrote it in 2nd person, which came easier to me than I thought it would. Maybe I'll do it more often...

I like how the first chapter came out the best. Not that the others are bad, but I just like the first one the most, with all its descriptions! The last chapter gets a special shoutout for showcasing Mario's need to appear Strong in front of others, though.

Current Mood: happy
Current Location: Home

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Fic Commentary: Preparations Planned While Peaked
Fic Commentary: Passing the Torch - An Interlude
Fic Commentary: Of Event Planning and Sick Younger Brothers
Happy Aggresively Arospec Week!
Write the Aro rep you wanna see in the world...!
More Professor Toad!
I STARTED THIS FIC IN 2011 AND I FINISHED IT
Happy ASAW 2022!!!
Better late than never...
Finally got this fic done...
I wrote another fic! Yay!
Hey I finished writing a fic for once

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