Fic: A Surprise Visit

[mrsluigivargas]

A Surprise Visit
Despite all appearances and assumptions, Bowser could, in fact, be quite stealthy when he wanted to be.
Luigi's the unlucky one to find this out, after he's snatched away in the middle of the night from outside the Mushroom Castle. He has no idea where Bowser's taking him, but the path is starting to look kind of familiar…

Fandom: Super Mario
Rating: General Audiences
Characters: Luigi, Bowser, Mario
Relationships: Mario & Luigi, Luigi & bowser
Additional Tags: AU - Rapunzel Fusion, Angst, Misunderstandings
Length: 2,835 words

I feel like I keep saying this, but I feel like I’ve unlocked a new type of emotional writing ever since Ti voglio tanto bene. The sections where Luigi’s reflecting on how much stress he’s under hits and flows really good.

I need to practice writing argument, though. MAN, that was tricky. Don know how I managed to figure it out, to be honest. Also there was this one bit where Luigi’s on the ground crying and originally I was going to have him begging but I couldn’t figure out how to do that without making it feel like a kink, lmao. And that wasn’t what I was going for, here XD

I wrote the ending of this fic in future tense because it felt right. I’ve done it before, but that was more of a “bonus scenes” context. Here it's in the same storyline, it's just that I didn’t wanna write it very detailed-like, haha. Being broader worked in its favor, as far as the mood was concerned.